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Hi, I just want someone to help me reduce the number of words I wrote and perhap
Hi, I just want someone to help me reduce the number of words I wrote and perhaps make it more consice? Also, since English is my second language maybe try to change some of the expressions to something more a bit more touching? The purpose of this writing is to raise money through gofundme for my aunt. She survived my cousin who passed away last week. She lives in Colombia under terrible! Terrible conditions of poverty and I worry about their financial status specially after my cousin who was 23 and worked to help mend his family’s needs passed away. Any money raised will help them relocate from the very dangerous neighborhood they live in and will help them pay for a couple of month’s rent. His two sisters are 19 and 20 and after what happened to Alexander my cousin, the family is afraid something might happen to the girls. Alexander sacrificed himself trying to give his parents and sisters some financial stability and in doing so he was killed. The family feels we need to help his parents and two sisters so that he can rest in peace. Would you please help me add this in a way that is not so dramatic yet that people understand that life restricted my cousin from living a normal life as a kid and as teenager and then even his life was talen away from him. We as a family just want to make life a bit more just for them.
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