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Wk3 REFLECTION: JAMA POMM Schmidt “When You Come Into My Room”
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Wk3 REFLECTION: JAMA POMM Schmidt “When You Come Into My Room”
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This poem is the first of two reflection prompts for this week from the Journal of the American Medical Association (JAMA) series “A Piece of My Mind” (POMM), where medical practitioners and care recipients reflect on their personal experiences. Please reflect on each short article, submitting your short essays about each in the corresponding module. Both JAMA POMM articles provide insight into the benefits of Narrative Medicine: one from the provider and one from the patient perspective.
Once you’ve drafted your short reflection essay, check the rubric associated with this module: make sure that the components we grade – like spelling, grammar, paragraph structure, and citation of reference works – are addressed in your submission. This rubric is designed to spell-out the requirements of communicating at an undergraduate level starting this week, such as proofreading and citation of source material.
Reflection Assignment: A Piece of Your Mind
Clients on the receiving end of medical care who share their stories can help providers to be more aware of them and their experiences. If we (the caregivers) are really listening, stories can enlighten us. The patient narratives can leave lasting impressions on who we become as caregivers and how we serve our fellow man.
1. Read
Read JAMA POMM (1996) poem “When You Come Into My Room” by Stephen A. Schmidt, EdD
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2. Reflect
Click Submit Assignment.
In the text area, write two paragraphs total (about 150-200 words total) with your thoughts on these questions. It’s a good idea to write your paragraphs in Word or Pages on your computer, saving, and then pasting into the course, so there’s no chance you’ll lose your work.
How did this list (or statement or poem) make you feel when you read it? Did you find this format to be an effective (and perhaps even an artful) way of getting his points and feelings across? Why or why not?
What does the author mean at the end when he says, “When you come into my room, promise me presence?” Can you think of examples from your own experience as a patient when you didn’t feel like you had the healthcare professional’s full presence? How does that feel for you as a patient?
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REFLECTION Rubric
REFLECTION Rubric
Criteria Ratings Pts
Quality of reflection writing structure
1 pts
Full Marks
Paragraphs have a beginning, middle, and end that follow logically from each other to tell the story of your reflection.
0.5 pts
Partial credit
Content of reflection is evident but flow of ideas is difficult to follow over the 2+ paragraphs OR the paragraphs are repetitive such that distinct points are unclear per paragraph
0 pts
No Marks
Content of reflection not evident. Example: ” I did/didn’t like this work. It was ok/awful to read. I have nothing more to say about it. The End”
/ 1 pts
Source attribution
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0.5 pts
Full Marks
All three components included correctly. Yes! You are writing at the expected undergraduate level!
0.25 pts
1 component missing
References section at end but no in-text citation OR in-text citation but unrecognizable or missing references format at end.
0 pts
No Marks
Lack of quotation marks around a direct quote OR missing both in-text citations AND References section.
/ 0.5 pts
Length
0.25 pts
Full Marks
150-250 words organized into 2+ paragraphs
0.15 pts
Partial credit
1 typo. Get in the habit of using spell & grammar check for college-level writing. Personally, I am a poor typist and need to autocheck everything I write. For instance, I tend to reverse g and n in words ending with “-ing”. It’s annoyign when I don’t catch this typ.! If you catch me makign a typo in announcements or assignments (other than in this rubric where I’m doing it on purpose as an example), message me through Carmen and I’ll waive 1 such error for you for every 1 of mine you catch so I can fix it! You might be surprised how this adds up given my lack of touch-typing skill…
/ 0.25 pts
Total Points: 0
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